Author’s note: Hello everyone… sorry for the long absence from here….
Here’s my new poem…comments and criticisms would be appreciated.
A world less ordinary,
A world sublime!
Oh! Take me there with you
Thou who wield imagination.
Take me, ye who dream
Into a world of eternal beauty
Where all seasons seem pleasant
Where the days are full of jubilant energy
Helios showering its warmth generously
And the nights nothing but comfort.
The river of stars enchanting all observers.
Take me, ye believers of the ideal
Where subtle expression is as good as brash calls
Where affection is a sea breeze, not a vice
And love is sweetly innocent.
Where little means a lot, and a lot means little
Our identity not beyond our soul.
Take me, ye whose imagination
Is greater than mine own;
To thine superior vision of perfection.
And I would have dwelt in it forever
Had not the pull of my corporeal self
Dragged me so reluctantly into the real.